The advantage of living in school dormitory

Outline
Introduction:Living in school dormitory is a not bad.
Thesis statement: There are five advantage of living in school dormitory
1Support
Topic sentence: students can discuss homework
Support:The guy livein next door can teach me c++.
2Support
Topic sentence: Don’t need to spend much money by living
Support: The dormitory in school is cheap
3Support
Topic sentence: It is easy to know us
Support: I and my room-mate are so close
4Support
Topic sentence: We can learn to be independent.
Support: I need to control my live ..
5Support
Topic sentence:We have free time for interest
Support:I can play band in school.

Concluding sentence:
Living in school have many advantage is a good choice.
The advantage of living in school dormitory
Living in school dormitory is a kind of student’s way of live,and it is a not bad way.There are five advantage of living in school dormitory.
The first advantage is that the students can discuss homework, so our studing will become better.For example,I don’t understand how to write and run C++,but the guy who lives next door is good at computer language.He can help me about learning C++.
The second，I don’t need to spend much money by living .The dormitory in school is more cheap than another place.And its environment isn’t bad.
The third ，It is easy to know us if we live together so that we can make friends with other more easy. For example ,I and my room-mate are both the kind of person who is shy and ineloquent, so if me weren't the room-mate together, we couldn't be the friend which are so close as now.
The four we can learn to be independent with our parents.For example,I need to control myself don't waste money in something needless, and some no one will restraint me not to play computer all day but have a time for study everyday.
The last, we are so free in dormitory so we have many time for interest and club. As me ,I join the cgu wind band and play tuba in there.I need to spend many time to practice than I can play music in the stage with other.You need many time if you play a band.
I think to be an university liveing in school dormitory live in school is a good choice . it have many advantage and can let you have precious experiences